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Diary Entry - July 6th 1718
Voyaging to Tairawhiti
Waka
301 years ago I was on a waka sailing to New Zealand with some of my family It took so long, I got sea sick a lot, and all we had to eat was meat,coconuts and vegetables! We had to eat all that for a whole month! We couldn’t even sleep! 1 because all the noise 2 because the water was too rough 3 because everyone had to do jobs. But not me I got to rest. but sometimes I helped them do the sailing. Whenever it rained we had to squeeze in the hut unless there was another place to keep dry. but other then that it was pretty fun! Except everyone getting sea sick! We had to stay in the same clothes for one whole month. Luckily I had my cousins with me or else it would be pretty boring. I looked up a dash of lighting struck ahhhh! After a boring rainy day it was sunny once again a month later we found land and started building us a place what's that another waka
301 years ago I was on a waka sailing to New Zealand with some of my family It took so long, I got sea sick a lot, and all we had to eat was meat,coconuts and vegetables! We had to eat all that for a whole month! We couldn’t even sleep! 1 because all the noise 2 because the water was too rough 3 because everyone had to do jobs. But not me I got to rest. but sometimes I helped them do the sailing. Whenever it rained we had to squeeze in the hut unless there was another place to keep dry. but other then that it was pretty fun! Except everyone getting sea sick! We had to stay in the same clothes for one whole month. Luckily I had my cousins with me or else it would be pretty boring. I looked up a dash of lighting struck ahhhh! After a boring rainy day it was sunny once again a month later we found land and started building us a place what's that another waka
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